tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post3134247896212008299..comments2024-01-05T08:46:14.001-05:00Comments on A Rage of Angel: Five Sentence Fiction: TatteredAngel Zapatahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01166540490117426226noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post-19484604717993521742012-03-19T07:02:16.975-04:002012-03-19T07:02:16.975-04:00Wow. Just wow! Very strong! I'm glad to have m...Wow. Just wow! Very strong! I'm glad to have met you and I look forward to reading more of your work.Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01174513715697810694noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post-63640620384638651692012-03-15T13:23:42.897-04:002012-03-15T13:23:42.897-04:00I kind of loved her transformation into a mummy. O...I kind of loved her transformation into a mummy. Onward to healing, Angel!John Wiswellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post-85433288355977869212012-03-14T15:56:17.024-04:002012-03-14T15:56:17.024-04:00Angel, can feel the woman's pain so strongly i...Angel, can feel the woman's pain so strongly in your story. <br /><br />Glad you've joined in on 5 sentence fiction. I've been fascinated by the 5X5 fiction on your other site too.Jo-Anne Teal (jtvancouver)https://www.blogger.com/profile/10560042112608893203noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post-69483298466623300462012-03-13T22:07:15.793-04:002012-03-13T22:07:15.793-04:00Great pack to this one. Love the ending especially...Great pack to this one. Love the ending especially, gives it a whole 'nother pathos. Peace...Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01110078016784294934noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post-60137121685408448222012-03-12T20:36:38.863-04:002012-03-12T20:36:38.863-04:00Hey, I really appreciate you all coming by and rea...Hey, I really appreciate you all coming by and reading this tiny heartbreaker. Please do stop by Lillie McFerrin's blog. Click the links to read what other writers have created with the same prompt word.Angel Zapatahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01166540490117426226noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post-19313404362085688152012-03-12T19:01:55.493-04:002012-03-12T19:01:55.493-04:00Smack! That one definitely packs a punch. Always d...<em>Smack!</em> That one definitely packs a punch. Always dark beauty in your writing.<br />Okay, twist my arm...EChttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09359075647077590741noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post-16566128277845685862012-03-12T15:11:31.407-04:002012-03-12T15:11:31.407-04:00This sings with anguish. Terrific addition to the ...This sings with anguish. Terrific addition to the FSF family!Bullishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05343416717330536392noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post-84904688699211001232012-03-12T15:01:07.391-04:002012-03-12T15:01:07.391-04:00My heart clutches—beautiful and dark. I especially...My heart clutches—beautiful and dark. I especially like that the 1st person narrator conveys the woman's feelings so strongly (& their relationship).K M Breidenthalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01436798038876589888noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4766126582167317081.post-84560745816889713282012-03-12T11:01:30.298-04:002012-03-12T11:01:30.298-04:00I absolutely LOVE this. Such emotion! I can feel h...I absolutely LOVE this. Such emotion! I can feel her pain.Angie Richmondhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03427286424394081888noreply@blogger.com