Welcome to "A Rage of Angel." Don't worry, I'm not angry. I'm a writer. An unpaid writer. I submit work to print and online publications. On occasion, they accept it. I (mostly) don't get paid. Nope. Sure don't. Okay. Maybe I am angry. Deep breaths. I need money. I get hungry. *sigh* Pardon my tirade. As I was saying, I'm a writer. Welcome to my site.
The depth in this piece is like a spiral spinning downwards - so many layers of perspective. A few stunning lines, "fear is redundant", "love is unrevealing" carry your message through, and damn it's a hell of an ending.
Angel, Poetry is something I really strugle with but you do it very well indeed. Well done, I really liked that one.
ReplyDeleteRegards, David.
great stuff ang!
ReplyDeleteI'm late, but I'm swinging by to read now...
ReplyDeleteThe depth in this piece is like a spiral spinning downwards - so many layers of perspective.
ReplyDeleteA few stunning lines, "fear is redundant", "love is unrevealing" carry your message through, and damn it's a hell of an ending.